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雅思写作范文
雅思写作
考试时间：60分钟 题数：2篇文章，共400字
题 型：TASK 1 图表说明文，TASK 2 议论文
文章内容：教育问题，环保，社科，伦理问题等
参考评分例句
作文没有半分，最小分单位为1.0。
0-2分
再往下就是没怎么写的，就写几十个字，那就1、2分，当然，啥也不写就是0了。
3分
“I is a boy.”这就是3分。
4分
跑题、严重偏题，文笔再一般般的话，就是4分。
5分
如果论点无新意，有明显的模板格式，老掉牙的句子多：开头With the development of economy……要么就是More and more people……动不动就“As a result”没完没了地用，通遍一大堆“In my opinion”，“I think”，“There be”句型，这种东西唬弄四六级也就算了，拿来糊弄雅思，未免有点自讨没趣了。这样的就是5分的固定模式。
6分：
文章切题，语句通顺，没有明显错误（小错在6个以内），有一些比较不错的语句（复杂句、排比、倒装、从句等等）就是6分的标准了。
7分：
文笔流畅，错误极少，有个别闪光点就是7分。
8分
论点新颖、别具一格，或者文风极富个性，与众不同。能让人留下深刻印象。其他标准同6分的话，就是8分。
或者论点一般，但十分切题。语言很漂亮，令人印象深刻。也是8分（不过一般这样也可以给7分）。
9分
语句华丽，行文如吟诗作画，笔下冉冉生辉，文章观点别具匠心，让人读了怅然舒爽或义愤填膺、栩栩如生或回味无穷，那就是9分了。很多native都写不出来。在这里就不给例子了，因为不是一两句就能体现得出文章的出彩，必须通读全文，有“神”在文中。
雅思写作常用表达
1起始段首句常用句式
As the proverb says:"..." 如谚语说：“...”
It can be easily proved that... 很容易证明...
It goes without saying that... 不用说...
No one can deny that... 谁也不能否认...
2. 推展段首句常用句式
One thing which is equally important to the above mentioned is... 与上述同样重要的一件事是...
Another special consideration in this case is that... 对这个问题的另一考虑是... Besides, we should not neglect that... 除此之外，我们还不能忽视...
There is certain amount of truth in this, but we still have a problem... 尽管大量事实如此，但我们还有一个疑问...
What is also with noticing is that... 另一个值得注意的是...
3 结尾
Taking into account of all these factors, we may reach the conclusion that …
All reliable evidences point to one saying, that is …
For the reasons presented above, I strongly commit to the notion that ….
Recognizing the fact that …, it should drive us to conclude that….
To put all into a nutshell, I ….
Judging from all evidence offered, It is clear that there is virtually some truth in both statements. However, if asked to make a choice, I will not hesitate to assent to the former/latter. I believe that …
雅思写作范文：应该为了工作送孩子去幼儿园吗
Young children should stay in Kindergarten or nursery schools so that their mothers can return to work earlier. Do you agree or disagree with the opinion?
In the past, mothers usually stayed with children when they were young. However, nowadays with more and more competition in society, mothers are deprived of most of the mothers’ rights. Therefore, kindergarten takes the job sharing mothers’ jobs. Someone believes that staying in kindergarten could be a wise choice for the present parents. However, the others doubt. I prefer to children’s studying in kindergarten. The reasons are as follows.
First of al, it’s obvious that kindergartens can offer children more systematic education than household teaching. The teachers have been well trained of children caring. The kindergarten provides not only good teaching facilities but friendly and harmonious studying environment where kids can play together and learn how to co-operate in a team.
Secondly, as children’s parents have to make a living, they probably have no choice but to work continually with no opportunity to study, which leads to no time spent on children caring. As a consequence, to leave children in kindergarten must be a mutual way for both parents and their children.
Last but not least, to reduce financial burden of the family, mother had better return to work as soon as possible for the cost of raising children and footing the bill of any consumption. That’s why so many young couples don’t choose to have children earlier. It is a fact every couple has to face and try figuring out the proper way to solve it.
In a word, I do support that young children should stay in kindergarten. And parents should return to work earlier. It is not only good for parents but children as well.
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