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雅思写作的典型错误和参考答案

发布时间:[2007-2-8 16:43:40]

第一节 改错练习

    对于大多数国内雅思考生而言,5-6分是比较容易取得的分数。但是有部分同学连续考两次雅思,作文均得5分。他们百思不得其解:他们掌握了写作的技巧,也有充分的论点论据,为什么6分这么难?其实他们的症结在于语言基础太不扎实,出现大量语言错误,通篇充斥着句子结构和用词错误,甚至于第一段就出现“低级”语言错误十几处,让考官目不忍睹。在过去六年里,笔者批改了培训学员的近十万篇习作,对考生常见问题进行了归纳整理,及时指出他们的错误,并从中英语言差异的角度,详细分析问题出现的深层次成因,从而达到治标兼治本的效果。

    下面的改错练习,希望考生认真分析其错误之处并找出其成因,不要停留在改错的表层水平,应该挖掘其深层次的成因,以避免屡次犯同样的“低级”错误。

    1. The invention of computers makes people live more comfortable and convenient.

__________________________________

    2. Don’t put hand in pocket.

_______________ ___________________

    3. Many traffic accidents occurred is the result of careless.

__________________________________

    4. Last night was too cold.

__________________________________

    5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages, such as it is very clean and cheap.

__________________________________

    6. Some people claim that fast food will instead of traditional food.

__________________________________

    7. Despite he is very diligent at study, he stills cannot pass the IELTS test.

__________________________________

    8. I finished homework and went out of dormitory for a drink.

__________________________________

    9. Though the Internet has many benefits, but it also has some drawbacks.

__________________________________

    10. If you are convenient, please give me a hand.

__________________________________

    11. In the past, the price of milk was so expensive that few people could hardly afford it.

__________________________________

    12. I forgot my watch at home.

__________________________________

    13. Smoking is harmful to your body.

__________________________________

    14. Under his help, we past the IELTS test.

__________________________________

    15. The two types of designs exist difference.

__________________________________

    16. The true fact is he never offers help to others.

__________________________________

    17. There are many people plan to study abroad.

__________________________________

    18. Keep pets are very popular among people live in big city.

__________________________________

    19. If let alone at home, many old people are very dangerous.

__________________________________

    20. The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease, however, they seldom do so.

__________________________________

    21. Today is very hot, I stay home.

__________________________________

    22. When talking to the interviewer, my heart was beating very fast.

__________________________________

    23. He gave the rose to the lovely lady that he had bought for his wife.

__________________________________

    24. Comparing with the performance of Linda, Kent’s performance is far from perfect.

__________________________________

    25. The big noise makes me can’t sleep well.

__________________________________

    26. My suggestion is more attention should be attached to the issue of youth drug abuse.

__________________________________

    27. The price of milk is more expensive than rice.

__________________________________

    28. The amount of bikes will decline in ten years.

__________________________________

    29. Smoking is harmful to one’s body. On the one hand, it can cause lung cancer. On the other hand, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman is pregnant.

__________________________________

    30. The reason why people choose to live in cities is because the city life is more convenient and colorful.

__________________________________

    31. People think develop space research will spend a huge number of money.

__________________________________

    32. Now people go abroad becomes very easy.

__________________________________

    33. Computer is a useful tool for student learn English.

__________________________________

    34. Raising pets are good for old people and child.

__________________________________

    35. Pet like dog and cat accompany them.

__________________________________

    36. Keep pet in big city is not allowed.

__________________________________

    37. There are many medical reports reveal that keeping pet can prevent heart disease and help patient to feel comfortably.

__________________________________

    38. Discuss about/complain about/enter into the room/contact with/

__________________________________

    39. Keep a pet would affect familial relationship.

__________________________________

    40. It arises a public debate as to whether we humans should carry out experiments on animals.

__________________________________

    41. Pursuit of fashion spends much money and waste much time.

__________________________________

    42. However, others people suggest that college students do the part-time job is quite beneficial.

__________________________________

    43. Young people live and study by themselves is of great significance to their future career.

__________________________________

    44. On the whole, computer games have both advantages and disadvantages. But fairly speaking, everyone has to admit that it’s disadvantages far overweight it’s advantages.

__________________________________

    45. I find myself difficult to work and study there due to my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.

__________________________________

    46. I am very difficult to write essays in English.

__________________________________

    47. When one is over 70 years old, he is very dangerous if left alone at home.

__________________________________

    48. I hope this letter would draw your attention and look into the case.

__________________________________

    49. Last year saw a rapidly raise in the volume of output.

__________________________________

    50. A small thief entered into my room and my room was stolen last night.

__________________________________

    51. I would like a single room to live and study.

__________________________________

    52. I am sorry for my abrupt departure that day, for I received a telephone that day asking me to return back home immediately.

__________________________________

    53. I and my sister like pets very much. Therefore we strongly against the ban on pet-raising.

__________________________________

    54. They maybe very busy so that they can not spare some time for their aged parents.

__________________________________

    55. The curve rose upward sharply in the past few days.

__________________________________

    56. After three days’ meeting, we drew a final conclusion that Tom is a dishonest man.

第二节 参考答案(黑体部分为修改内容)

    1. The invention of computers enables people to live more comfortably and conveniently.

    2. Don’t put your hand in your pocket.

    3. Many traffic accidents occurred, which is the result of carelessness.

    4. Last night it was too cold.

    5. By comparison, nuclear energy has some distinctive advantages; for example, it is very clean and cheap.

    6. Some people claim that fast food will replace traditional food.

    7. Although he is very diligent at study, he still cannot pass the IELTS test.

    8. I finished my homework and went out of the dormitory for a drink.

    9. Though the Internet has many benefits, it also has some drawbacks.

    10. If it is convenient to you, please give me a hand.

    11. In the past, the price of milk was so high few people could afford it.

    12. I left my watch at home.

    13. Smoking is harmful to your health.

    14. With help, we passed the IELTS test.

    15. The two types of design have difference.

    16. The fact is that he never offers help to others.

    17. There are many people planning to study abroad.

    18. Keeping pets is very popular among people who live in the big city.

    19. If let alone at home, many old people are very likely to get into danger.

    20. The society should pay more attention to the problems of education, poverty and disease; however, it seldom does so.

    21. Today it is very hot, so I stay home.

    22. When talking to the interviewer, I feel that my heart was beating very fast.

    23. He gave the lovely lady the rose that he had bought for his wife.

    24. Compared with the performance of Linda, Kent’s is far from perfect.

    25. The big noise makes me unable to sleep well.

    26. My suggestion is that more attention should be attached to the issue of youth drug abuse.

    27. The price of milk is higher than that of rice.

    28. The number of bikes will decline in ten years.

    29. Smoking is harmful to one’s health. For one thing, it can cause lung cancer. For another, it can increase the chances of having a miscarriage if a woman is pregnant.

    30. The reason why people choose to live in cities is that the city life is more convenient and colorful.

    31. People think that developing space research will cost a huge sum of money.

    32. Now going abroad becomes very easy.

    33. The computer is a useful tool for students learning English.

    34. Raising pets is good for old people and children.

    35. Pets like dogs and cats accompany them.

    36. Keeping a pet in the big city is not allowed.

    37. Many medical reports reveal that keeping a pet can prevent heart disease and help patients to feel comfortable.

    38.Discuss /complain about/enter the room/contact /

    39.There arises a public debate as to whether we humans should carry out experiments on animals.

    40. Pursuit of fashion costs much money and wastes much time.

    41. However, other people suggest that college students doing the part-time job is quite beneficial.

    42. Young people living and studying by themselves is of great significance to their future career.

    43. On the whole, computer games have both advantages and disadvantages. But fairly speaking, everyone has to admit that the disadvantages far outweigh the advantages.

    44. I find it difficult to work and study there due to my roommate’s inconsiderate behavior.

    45. It is very difficult for me to write essays in English.

    46. When one is over 70 years old, he is prone to danger if left alone at home.

    47. I hope this letter would draw your attention and you will look into the case.

    48. Last year saw a rapid rise in the volume of output.

    49. A thief entered my room and some valuables in my room were stolen last night.

    50. I would like a single room to live and study in.

    51. I am sorry for my abrupt departure that day, for I received a telephone call that day asking me to return home immediately.

    54.My sister and I like pets very much. Therefore we are strongly against the ban on pet-raising.

    55. They may be very busy so that they can not spare some time for their aged parents.

    56. The curve rose sharply in the past few days.

    57. After three days’ meeting, we drew a conclusion that Tom is a dishonest man.

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