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看到这么多的优秀本科录取,你是不是也想知道这些学子在申请中的成功故事呢?下面和大家一起分享两个案例:全美创业学第一的巴布森学院及全美排名第12的西北大学的本科录取故事。让TA们的成功故事,也能成为你通往成功的参考。
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首先,与大家分享的是成功进入全美创业学第一的巴布森学院的W.Q.同学的故事!
W同学加入PO大家庭之前
初见W同学,她的活力、果敢、好奇心就给PO老师们留下了深刻印象。因此,我们决定继续挖掘这些美好的品质,将其与创业学的积极社会影响力结合起来。而这正是全美创业学第一的巴布森学院的核心特色 – 创业和商业不光促进经济资本增长,同时也将助益社会的良性发展。
W同学加入PO大家庭之后
在W同学加入PO后,我们首先从课外活动入手,参考美国当前流行的GirlTrek活动(http://www.girltrek.org/),结合她热爱运动,擅长编程的特点,指导她发起慈善健步活动,并建立活动官方网站。W同学将该活动命名为Running Water,因为参与活动的人需要每天走10,000步,每走一步就会捐献一块钱,所集善款会捐给UNICEF(联合国儿童基金会)净水项目,为中国乃至世界各地缺水地区送给纯净的饮用水。
至今,这个活动W同学已经持续做了两年,其间她不断通过Running Water官方网站、学校、微信和其他社交平台推广该项目,吸引成员加入,并将一直做下去。
W同学成功进入巴布森学院
W同学的活动不仅创造出经济价值,还产生了社会影响,这与巴布森学院的理念追求不谋而合,并且她在活动中表现出的积极主动,果敢决断,也为她的申请锦上添花,使她最终成功收获巴布森学院的offer!
Before W joining PO
W’s vibrancy, determination and curiosity impressed us from the moment we met her and PO worked with W to channel these qualities into social impact entrepreneurship that reflected Babson’s charge of creating equal amounts of social and economic capital in entrepreneurship and business.
After W joining PO
Linking W’s interest in fitness and technology with current trends in the US to ensure her project resonated with US admission officers, PO worked with W to launch a running project and accompanying website. Entitled Running Water, modeled off of GirlTrek in the US (http://www.girltrek.org/), W organized a group of peers to walk 10,000 steps every day with each step raising money for clean water projects in China and around the world. PO worked with W to design a project, advertise to her peers and then continue to develop and iterate both the club and platform throughout her junior and senior year.
Welcome W to Babson
This active contribution to her community and her determination to add both social and economic value through her work made W a poster-child applicant for an entrepreneurial and socially conscious Babson.
案例二来自于成功进入全美第12的西北大学的H.O.同学!
H同学加入PO大家同之前
H同学在进入PO前就有着非常明确的目标,新闻学是她的梦想,更是她不断努力的方向,但是她认为自己平淡无奇,乏善可陈,并没有什么个性可以向招生官展现。
H同学加入PO大家同之后
H同学加入PO后,老师们着力于挖掘她的个性亮点,帮助她明白并不是轰轰烈烈的大事才可以被称为与众不同的亮点,其实一些生活细节恰恰反映出她的独特之处,自然而然的流露才是真性情。因此在个人陈述中,主要展现H同学从初到美国,极度依赖家人,必须时刻与家人联系,到适应美高生活,并积极参与学校活动的转变过程。
H同学的补充文书则集中描写一件事情,那就是实习期间她在芝加哥市街头做记者访问的经历,在访问中她表现出的热情和专业度,无不体现出她对新闻的热爱和追求,以及对未来在西北大学学习新闻学的向往。
凭着出彩的文书,H同学顺利收获西北大学Offer,并将进入她梦寐以求的Medill新闻学院学习。
Before W joining PO
H came to us with a strong interest in journalism, but with little idea of how to present herself and her personality to US universities.
After W joining PO
We worked with her through multiple iterations and drafts of her personal statement until it reflected who H felt that she was. She ended up focusing her personal statement on the importance of letting go of comforts such as frequent communication with her family and habits that she was used to in order to embrace, absorb and contribute to her school community at Miss Hall's. In her Northwestern Supplement, we worked with H to focus on a particular story in her journalism internship to showcase the experience and passion she has for journalism before helping her describe the experience she aims to create at Northwestern of capturing this same level of personality and human nature in interviews with members of the Chicago community.
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